FINAL HEY BROTHER

Improvements:

From my first clip I have made full use of the green screen with tight edits in place of a stills image. Incorporated a lip sync sequence at the beginning. It was much more tighter cut so that the pace of the clip was improves. I revisited the rushes and utilised raw material we filmed. As a result the music video shows a good balance of performance and narrative and makes more sense.  

As I said I revisited the rushes and utilised some of the original film, which works because it helps explain the narrative a better pace which is key for a slow song. Also I changed the green screen from a picture to a piece of film which continues the story but because I have the singer on the screen as well and it works we with a slow song.